Sweep Me Off My Feet, Never Let Me Hit The Ground

Alright, this is a new one.
Feedback is more than welcome.
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I've never felt so out of my league.
My heart stops when she smiles at me,
and somehow I forget
to breathe.
And for the first time in a long time,
I'm suffering butterflies.
As I look inside her heart, I find...

That I could quote a quote or sing a song,
but it'd still all fall
short of what she deserves.

So I let go
and lose myself
in the glory of her love.
She takes my hand,
and I give in.
If this was forever, it'd be enough.

Time is running out for us.
The end is drawing near,
as for all good things
it must.
Yet she shows me up again,
making the best of
the time we're given.

And if her eyes sparkle one more time,
I swear I will have died
and gone to heaven.

So I let go
and lose myself
in the glory of her love.
She takes my hand,
and I give in.
If this was forever, it'd be enough.

So we'll step into the dying sun.
Take my hand, slow it down.
We'll do whatever we can to make this last.
And when we finally have to part,
our lips will meet, you'll make your mark.
And my heart will walk away, along with you...

So I let go
and lose myself
in the glory of your love.
When you take my hand,
I'll give in.
If this was forever, it'd be more than enough.

And when we meet again,
because I know we will,
I'll remember all you made me feel.

I like it, sir. It seems a little unflowing, which might be on purpose for symbolic reasons

but nice

It's got a little bit of a swing beat. That could be why. Ahaha.
Thanks.

Post it when you record bro