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Thoughts?
Beautiful.
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I like it.
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It was alright.
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Ehh, I didn't like it much.
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Horrible.
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PostSubject: Sweep Me Off My Feet, Never Let Me Hit The Ground   Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:11 am


Alright, this is a new one.
Feedback is more than welcome.
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I've never felt so out of my league.
My heart stops when she smiles at me,
and somehow I forget
to breathe.
And for the first time in a long time,
I'm suffering butterflies.
As I look inside her heart, I find...

That I could quote a quote or sing a song,
but it'd still all fall
short of what she deserves.

So I let go
and lose myself
in the glory of her love.
She takes my hand,
and I give in.
If this was forever, it'd be enough.

Time is running out for us.
The end is drawing near,
as for all good things
it must.
Yet she shows me up again,
making the best of
the time we're given.

And if her eyes sparkle one more time,
I swear I will have died
and gone to heaven.

So I let go
and lose myself
in the glory of her love.
She takes my hand,
and I give in.
If this was forever, it'd be enough.

So we'll step into the dying sun.
Take my hand, slow it down.
We'll do whatever we can to make this last.
And when we finally have to part,
our lips will meet, you'll make your mark.
And my heart will walk away, along with you...

So I let go
and lose myself
in the glory of your love.
When you take my hand,
I'll give in.
If this was forever, it'd be more than enough.

And when we meet again,
because I know we will,
I'll remember all you made me feel.

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You could slit my throat
And with my last dying breath
I'd apologize for bleeding on your shirt
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PostSubject: Re: Sweep Me Off My Feet, Never Let Me Hit The Ground   Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:09 pm

I like it, sir. It seems a little unflowing, which might be on purpose for symbolic reasons Razz

but nice Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Sweep Me Off My Feet, Never Let Me Hit The Ground   Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:58 am

It's got a little bit of a swing beat. That could be why. Ahaha.
Thanks. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Sweep Me Off My Feet, Never Let Me Hit The Ground   Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:40 am

Post it when you record bro Very Happy

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